1. The novel’s main flaw is that its occasional longueurs detract from the main storyline; its editor might have wielded a sharper pair of scissors.
小说主要的瑕疵在于偶尔让人感到乏味的部分,这损害了主要故事情节。编辑或许可以删除一些乏味部分。

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2. The novel’s main flaw is that its occasional longueurs detract from the main storyline; its editor might have wielded a sharper pair of scissors.
小说主要的瑕疵在于偶尔让人感到乏味的部分,这损害了主要故事情节。编辑或许可以删除一些乏味部分。

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